Monday, September 22, 2008

55 word short story: My Eternal Desire

Jordan is his name. He's so dreamy, gorgeous blond hair and handsome eyes! He's the first guy I've ever kissed, feeling this passion sensation develop inside me. Like a tattoo, he's always on my heart..............Sigh....................I dream falling in love with Jordan eternally. I long for seeing what it's like to be in love.

4 comments:

nikix16 said...

Great description!

charles wells (cj) said...

was great, loved the line "like a tattoo, he's always on my heart." it was good

Pakou Lee said...

Good word choices. :)

ASHLEY <3 said...

i love it and i love the description. it makes me wanna fall in love!